hmm i think it needs a bit more.. but this is just a test and Judgement
what does everyone think of it?

opinions Please




this is not completed

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hmmm...well..im used to more like competitive gfx...so my critique is harsh.

ill go easy:
font is basic. Irregualr borders are only as good as how low the graininess on the outisde is. I dun like the stroke on the char. The blurriness from one char to the other is a lil strange and the colors dun really blend well witht eh bkrd, font, chars.

The idea is creative. And the border is inventive. The bkrd is orginal. If it was a lil dakrer itd be real nice. Take the border off the left character and lower the oppacity on both so they blend well. If you need an outline, use outerglow or drop shadow instead of stokre. Stroke is good for making text stand out, but dun really look hot on chars.

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i did some minor clean up . Changes some lighting and cleaned up the font edges, most notibly the n at the end. Added alil red insiode the pic to help blending along.

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Looks alright to me. Now i hope i get one that good looking, if i get one at all..........

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Lildog Drk75/Thf37
THE DOG DEMON'S OTHER/STRONGEST SON

When you outline a cut in ANYTHING you make baby jesus cry.

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Dark is banned from ever touching my computer again.

Dinav stop your jiber jabber

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COBRA KAI DOJO NEVER DIES
RIP Shiloh

Um... Did you guys notice he said he wanted to do this to improve his Photoshop skills? All your doing is roasting him. What kind of people are you...

She did Reallgood job thxs! i'm Rank 10 btw lol np!

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dude i'm a girl


hahah nah i dont mind the roasting
I know i r t3h sux0rz!



but its good ot have comments like that so i can learn and what may look better
thanks
RANK 10?!
I SWEAR it was rank8
silly tally tally
u goofball.

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Also the bottom of the S in Talisin looks a bit cut off.

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75 Samurai at last, hurray!

Well i didn't know you were a girl. And I'm pretty sure i could't put something like that together. I mean i did my avatar with MS Paint lol.

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Dark is banned from ever touching my computer again.

for once. i dun like ur colorings. The bottom completely deafeat the purpose of having an irregular border.

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lol I just liked the bottom's background

But I like the background in the top one too <.<

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Dark is banned from ever touching my computer again.

i liked dinav's version

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Sometimes when i take off my pants, yarr stares at me

Is this ok?

Level 65 Dragoon
Rank 9 Sandoria
Woodworking 72.0 Fishing 55.7
Smithing 34.0 Leathercraft 28.4
Bonecraft 22.7 Cooking 11.0

the background was made LONG ASS time ago its pretty huge and i used it on asianavenue.com b4 (during the old days)

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yea i made like 20-25 bkrds back in early summer when i quit ffxi for a lil while ane i still usem alot. I just addem on to things i whip up and it usually turns out nice.

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THIS looks WAY BETTER





I put alot thought like how idid with lildog's

I only have pictures of Tal's Sam.
cuz he thinks it looks cooler
which i agreee.
otherwise he probably "toot" me to death.


so yeah Having his SAm. i notice his gear is pretty much black andn red so i made the background dark red.
Any comments, flames , etc?

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Its too dark!

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COBRA KAI DOJO NEVER DIES
RIP Shiloh

uh...


ONE SEC i'll fix it



Edit:





LighteR?

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Cool thxs!

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