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Poncho_Rodriguez
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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2006 9:24 pm 
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So, after quiting FFXI I started this new hobby of writing down all the things I notice that piss me off, and exaggerate and write about them on this webpage I started. Anyway the website is http://www.thegrangertown.com

I've been doing it for about 4 months...I'm pretty sure it is not safe for work, there is a lot of swearing, and some topics that would offend a lot of people.

I have not edited any of the topics, so some of the originals suck, but I need some outside opinions from people that don't know me...do you think it's funny, should I continue the site, which stories completely suck and need editing, and any layout opinions.
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Metalmilitia
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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2006 10:37 pm 
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Hale
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Have only read a couple, but so far it looks pretty interesting; it is ugly as fuck, but overall I approve so far.

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Ultimaj
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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2006 10:58 pm 
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it reminds me a lot of maddox lol
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Hale
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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2006 11:03 pm 
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I thought so too, but I think it's more similar to earlier Ninjapirate articles.

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Poncho_Rodriguez
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PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2006 11:19 pm 
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Yeah I know it's ugly as all hell, I've been trying to mess with the layout forever...I'm out of ideas to try to make it look more professional.
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Whisp
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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 1:22 am 
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thats some awesome shit ! a lot better than that maddox page, maddox is retarded.

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Dmitry
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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 5:03 pm 
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The adventures thing is amusing.

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Poncho_Rodriguez
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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 5:08 pm 
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Whisp wrote:
thats some awesome shit ! a lot better than that maddox page, maddox is retarded.


I can't tell if this is sarcastic or not lol...

And does ANYONE have any experience with website designing...right now the layout looks like it was designed by a soccer mom...at halftime passing out orange slices. Help me lol
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Ponuh
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Just a question: did you write those jokes on the Burger King cups and bags?\


edit: Your site's pretty funny though.
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Whisp
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i enjoyed a lot of the jokes and criticisms and drawings. good stuff

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Tomake
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Ultimaj wrote:
it reminds me a lot of maddox lol

i was gonna say the same exact thing

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Ultimaj
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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 8:09 pm 
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hmm after delving deeper and reading some more stuff it's a whole lot like maddox's site
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Poncho_Rodriguez
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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 8:29 pm 
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Thanks for the compliments


Ultimaj wrote:
hmm after delving deeper and reading some more stuff it's a whole lot like maddox's site


Is this a good or bad thing...I know it's pretty lame that it's in the same sort of layout and I won't deny that I got the idea for writing little mini articles from maddox. I don't want it to seem like a maddox wannabe site though...meh. I'm trying to do different types of stuff like the random section and little adventure stuff. Not sure what else I can do to make it different.
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Ultimaj
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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 8:43 pm 
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lol i laughed at a lot of the stuff i was just pointing it out haha
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Whisp
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the difference is that you seem funny and intelligent while maddox seems like he's trying too hard

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I only read a few but you really put some real work into this lol. I like the "Poop at parties." That bar graph killed me.
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tracezero
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I thought that myspace one was hilarious, you really captured the bitchiness of emo kids.

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Poncho_Rodriguez
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lol I can't believe Dmitry AND Tracezero replied and didn't try to start anything. I'll have to be nice to you for maybe 1 day.
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