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| Author: | arlania [ Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:02 am ] |
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Was I bewitched so by the thin red line To notice not that time released its hold And let pale Iris snip the silver twine To steal sweet youth before it turned to gold. Existence now is not what I was told; No seraphim and harps to grace my ear, Just silence, painful silence, and the cold Discomfort of my masochistic fear, So icy cold, yet somehow seems to sear My soul until the ache's too much to bare, As mortal life mirages now appear: Intangible are they; away they tear. Mistake, it was; the curtain fell too soon When razor's edge did charm me like the moon. |
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| Author: | arlania [ Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:23 am ] |
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Lying in the dark Alone with my thoughts. I can't help but notice The pain I've brought. The sad thing is I's all my fault. I wish I could Just make it stop. Round and round, The same old thing. With all this change It's still the same. I will do something To end it all. Just depends When and how. |
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| Author: | ariaa [ Sun Mar 13, 2005 10:12 am ] |
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/clap |
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| Author: | Parade [ Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:29 pm ] |
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dream life you will live forever live life you will die tomorrow my life is a complete fiasco the dashboardshow is next weekend and i cant even fit into my little sisters jeans anymore my dad grounded me because he caught me in my moms makeup again hes such a nazi i tired cutting my wrists the otherday, some of the blood got on my pants and i totaly freaked, needless to say, they're ruined im up to 85 lbs now and i duno what to do. <sigh> i wish i could just run away to someplace where people understand me FUCK EMO thats my poem. props go to CheapSex for teh writings. |
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| Author: | Ponuh [ Sun Mar 13, 2005 3:53 pm ] |
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i came into this thread skeptical of online poetry but that's actually good. And I hate EMO more than anyone. I hate emo almost as much as i hate xbox |
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| Author: | Parade [ Sun Mar 13, 2005 3:57 pm ] |
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well emo is gay |
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| Author: | Ponuh [ Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:03 pm ] |
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No one knows this sorrow i feel within my body i know its real why the wind blows? why the sky blue? how come ashlee simpson can't sing worth a poo. THE SORROW OF MY HEART SCREAMS LIKE SATAN the tears of mine eye make god cry big bird is my hero big bird is my hero jim henson, take me now. |
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| Author: | arlania [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 3:56 am ] |
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I get a funny feeling, It comes from deep inside. I get all mad and angry, Wanting to go and hide. My doctor calls it depression, My dad says it's just me. But the thoughts and feelings, No one will ever be able to see. Some say I'm psycho, Some say I'm just weird. It's like I'm a different person, And the old me just disappeared. I get really edgy, I want to commit suicide real bad. Then I get a headache, Followed by feeling sad. I wish I could get help, I wish it would go away. Maybe if I keep praying real hard, It will some day. |
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| Author: | arlania [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 3:58 am ] |
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A silent plea, a question asked. This delighted face is but only a mask; Tearful nights, fearful dreams, Highly concealed internal screams. A giggle here and a giggle there, Beams of happiness everywhere; Alone in my room, the joy is vanished. For strength and sanity I am famished. Truths and lies, they're all the same, The unknown difference plaguing the brain. Let downs ricochet left and right, I'm searching for reason with all my might. Worn out whens and tiresome whys, Frustrated, desperate cries. Deep inside this feeling lasts Of undesired disappointments cast. One more day, one more try; That I keep telling myself, although awry. Hopeless wishes, dreams forsaken. If only the sun in my world would awaken. |
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| Author: | ariaa [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:49 am ] |
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I'd put some of mine up but I think I burned them all. =/ |
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| Author: | Kioto [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:50 am ] |
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oO |
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| Author: | ariaa [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:51 am ] |
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It was one of those "lets burn all of these negative feelings" moments. So about 3 huge binders went up in smoke. |
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| Author: | Kioto [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:06 am ] |
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Ahhh! I remember back in the day (when i was like, 15) i used to try and write poems, didnt work too well. I liked a few of these though. |
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| Author: | Supafly [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:09 pm ] |
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I put Lamborghini doors on an Es-ca-lade, With a pro so low look like I'm ridin' on blades, In one ear man, so now I'm sitting so pretty, I make 2 girls on tele look they're going both ways, Touch me, tease me, kiss me, please me............. |
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| Author: | squintz [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:27 pm ] |
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Supafly wrote: I put Lamborghini doors on an Es-ca-lade,
With a pro so low look like I'm ridin' on blades, In one ear man, so now I'm sitting so pretty, I make 2 girls on tele look they're going both ways, Touch me, tease me, kiss me, please me............. the game feat. 50. -how we do- btw i think "hate it or love it" is one of the best rap songs i've heard in a while. |
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| Author: | Ponuh [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:34 pm ] |
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I wish I was Japanese Nobody understands Kojoro Moromoko like I do, His wit and brilliance shine in Naruto Episode #12^_^ I wish I was japanese Kikoro Takamihiro's techno beats are amazing, ^________^V and everyone there loves anime, I'm sure I wish I was japanese, because if I was I could be a samurai master, So I'll just keep wishing I was Japanese, While I'm eating a hotdog in front of my Dell. Masterpiece! |
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| Author: | fallenseraph [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:16 pm ] |
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Poetry is for posers. |
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| Author: | Arrowyn [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:24 pm ] |
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I have great respect for people who can make great poetry, because I suck at it. |
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| Author: | fallenseraph [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:31 pm ] |
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Arrowyn wrote: I have great respect for people who can make great poetry, because I suck at it.
Ok I lied. I agree with Arrowyn. She sucks at poetry. (j/k) It's a difficult task to do if you don't know how to do it. But its great if you you can and are skilled at it. I suck at poetry. |
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| Author: | arlania [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:22 pm ] |
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No more questions, no more wrong. No more pretending not to be gone. I'm not all here; I'm not a whole. I'm simply a half, missing my soul. Just let me die, let me be in peace. Let me loose from this life, So I'll no longer feel weak. |
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| Author: | Ponuh [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:50 pm ] |
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...nothing's been posted for awhile... |
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| Author: | Ponuh [ Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:52 pm ] |
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but about the poems. the first one i thougth was very good but it seems many of the other have a very odd sing song rythm that don't match the lyrics. i'd love to see something you did in free verse :D |
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| Author: | arlania [ Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:16 am ] |
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Would you still be mad, If you’d see what I see? Would you be sad, If you knew about me? Would you still hate me, For wanting to die? If you knew my pain, If you’d seen how I’ve cried? |
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| Author: | arlania [ Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:18 am ] |
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Teetering on the edge, Back and forth from land to nothingness. Holding my breath for release, But holding on for a savior. Pushing one way, tugged another, Which way will I fall, which side shall prevail. One way leading to what is here and now, The other leading to a cowards release. Continuing through the wind down this winding edge. Tempted to fall wanting no one to catch. Dust blows by and leaves flow through, Watching me balance on this sharp tipped edge. On the edge, Back and forth. On my own... |
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| Author: | arlania [ Wed Mar 16, 2005 2:02 am ] |
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Something must be wrong with me with all this hurt inside, always bursting with anger, and never any pride. Something must be wrong with me if all I do is cry, I can't stop this pain all I want to do is die. Something must be wrong with me if my emotions run wild, all this confusion does is make me feel like a lost child. Something must be wrong with me with all these terrible things, always there and never gone depression is what it brings. Something must be wrong with me if I can't stop these thoughts, all this pain does is turn my stomach in knots. Something is truly wrong with me when I think there's only one way out, "Let this pain end," is all my heart will shout. |
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