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 Post subject: Poem
PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:02 am 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
Was I bewitched so by the thin red line
To notice not that time released its hold
And let pale Iris snip the silver twine
To steal sweet youth before it turned to gold.
Existence now is not what I was told;
No seraphim and harps to grace my ear,
Just silence, painful silence, and the cold
Discomfort of my masochistic fear,
So icy cold, yet somehow seems to sear
My soul until the ache's too much to bare,
As mortal life mirages now appear:
Intangible are they; away they tear.
Mistake, it was; the curtain fell too soon
When razor's edge did charm me like the moon.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:23 am 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
Lying in the dark
Alone with my thoughts.
I can't help but notice
The pain I've brought.
The sad thing is
I's all my fault.
I wish I could
Just make it stop.
Round and round,
The same old thing.
With all this change
It's still the same.
I will do something
To end it all.
Just depends
When and how.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 10:12 am 
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:29 pm 
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dream life you will live forever
live life you will die tomorrow
my life is a complete fiasco
the dashboardshow is next weekend
and i cant even fit into my little sisters jeans anymore
my dad grounded me because he caught me in my moms makeup again
hes such a nazi
i tired cutting my wrists the otherday, some of the blood got on my pants
and i totaly freaked, needless to say, they're ruined
im up to 85 lbs now and i duno what to do.
<sigh> i wish i could just run away
to someplace where people understand me

FUCK EMO


thats my poem. props go to CheapSex for teh writings.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 3:53 pm 
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i came into this thread skeptical of online poetry but that's actually good.

And I hate EMO more than anyone. I hate emo almost as much as i hate xbox


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 3:57 pm 
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well emo is gay


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:03 pm 
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Location: I will eat you alive I will eat you alive
No one knows
this sorrow i feel
within my body
i know its real
why the wind blows?
why the sky blue?
how come ashlee simpson
can't sing worth a poo.



THE SORROW OF MY HEART SCREAMS LIKE SATAN

the tears of mine eye make god cry

big bird is my hero
big bird is my hero
jim henson, take me now.


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 3:56 am 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
I get a funny feeling,
It comes from deep inside.
I get all mad and angry,
Wanting to go and hide.
My doctor calls it depression,
My dad says it's just me.
But the thoughts and feelings,
No one will ever be able to see.
Some say I'm psycho,
Some say I'm just weird.
It's like I'm a different person,
And the old me just disappeared.
I get really edgy,
I want to commit suicide real bad.
Then I get a headache,
Followed by feeling sad.
I wish I could get help,
I wish it would go away.
Maybe if I keep praying real hard,
It will some day.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 3:58 am 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
A silent plea, a question asked.
This delighted face is but only a mask;
Tearful nights, fearful dreams,
Highly concealed internal screams.
A giggle here and a giggle there,
Beams of happiness everywhere;
Alone in my room, the joy is vanished.
For strength and sanity I am famished.
Truths and lies, they're all the same,
The unknown difference plaguing the brain.
Let downs ricochet left and right,
I'm searching for reason with all my might.
Worn out whens and tiresome whys,
Frustrated, desperate cries.
Deep inside this feeling lasts
Of undesired disappointments cast.
One more day, one more try;
That I keep telling myself, although awry.
Hopeless wishes, dreams forsaken.
If only the sun in my world would awaken.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:49 am 
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I'd put some of mine up but I think I burned them all. =/


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:50 am 
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:51 am 
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It was one of those "lets burn all of these negative feelings" moments.

So about 3 huge binders went up in smoke.


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:06 am 
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Ahhh! I remember back in the day (when i was like, 15) i used to try and write poems, didnt work too well.
I liked a few of these though.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:09 pm 
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Location: Reflecting...
I put Lamborghini doors on an Es-ca-lade,
With a pro so low look like I'm ridin' on blades,
In one ear man, so now I'm sitting so pretty,
I make 2 girls on tele look they're going both ways,
Touch me, tease me, kiss me, please me.............


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:27 pm 
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Supafly wrote:
I put Lamborghini doors on an Es-ca-lade,
With a pro so low look like I'm ridin' on blades,
In one ear man, so now I'm sitting so pretty,
I make 2 girls on tele look they're going both ways,
Touch me, tease me, kiss me, please me.............



the game feat. 50.
-how we do-

btw i think "hate it or love it" is one of the best rap songs i've heard in a while.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:34 pm 
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I wish I was Japanese
Nobody understands Kojoro Moromoko like I do,
His wit and brilliance shine in Naruto Episode #12^_^
I wish I was japanese
Kikoro Takamihiro's techno beats are amazing,
^________^V and everyone there loves anime, I'm sure
I wish I was japanese,
because if I was I could be a samurai master,
So I'll just keep wishing I was Japanese,
While I'm eating a hotdog in front of my Dell.



Masterpiece!


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:16 pm 
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Poetry is for posers.


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:24 pm 
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I have great respect for people who can make great poetry, because I suck at it.


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:31 pm 
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Arrowyn wrote:
I have great respect for people who can make great poetry, because I suck at it.


Ok I lied. I agree with Arrowyn. She sucks at poetry. (j/k) It's a difficult task to do if you don't know how to do it. But its great if you you can and are skilled at it. I suck at poetry.


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:22 pm 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
No more questions, no more wrong.
No more pretending not to be gone.
I'm not all here; I'm not a whole.
I'm simply a half, missing my soul.
Just let me die, let me be in peace.
Let me loose from this life,
So I'll no longer feel weak.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:50 pm 
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:52 pm 
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but about the poems. the first one i thougth was very good but it seems many of the other have a very odd sing song rythm that don't match the lyrics. i'd love to see something you did in free verse :D


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:16 am 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
Would you still be mad,
If you’d see what I see?
Would you be sad,
If you knew about me?
Would you still hate me,
For wanting to die?
If you knew my pain,
If you’d seen how I’ve cried?

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:18 am 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
Teetering on the edge,
Back and forth from land to nothingness.
Holding my breath for release,
But holding on for a savior.
Pushing one way, tugged another,
Which way will I fall, which side shall prevail.
One way leading to what is here and now,
The other leading to a cowards release.
Continuing through the wind down this winding edge.
Tempted to fall wanting no one to catch.
Dust blows by and leaves flow through,
Watching me balance on this sharp tipped edge.
On the edge,
Back and forth.
On my own...

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 2:02 am 
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Location: Drifting in the breeze.
Something must be wrong with me
with all this hurt inside,
always bursting with anger,
and never any pride.

Something must be wrong with me
if all I do is cry,
I can't stop this pain
all I want to do is die.

Something must be wrong with me
if my emotions run wild,
all this confusion does
is make me feel like a lost child.

Something must be wrong with me
with all these terrible things,
always there and never gone
depression is what it brings.

Something must be wrong with me
if I can't stop these thoughts,
all this pain does
is turn my stomach in knots.

Something is truly wrong with me
when I think there's only one way out,
"Let this pain end,"
is all my heart will shout.

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